It is clear that between the initial cover letter and the final draft the writer did alot of work correcting and revising certain aspects. Not only did minor grammatical errors get fixed but information became more organized, and the content became more relevant. More emphasis was put on how the writer could learn and adapt while working for the company but that did not detract from the fact that she already had experience working.
Within the different drafts the suggestions that were given also seemed to make an impact on the final letter. It is obvious that the writer listened to, and put to use, the different ideas and suggestions. Not only did the letter become more fluid, but the tone became more authoritative.
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